Messy? Who me?

Summer’s delight.
Ice cream time in smudgekin’s world,
that’s a toddler’s chocolate delight.
Chocolately face and fingers too,
lick by lick by lick
by drip by drip by drip.
Slow salivating yumminess
then nose-in-cone finale.
Mama says “look at me!” Click.
Then clean-up time.

Written for Quadrille Monday at dVerse where Mish is hosting and asks us to use the word “smudge” or a form of the word in our poem of exactly 44 words, sans title. Photo from Inside Source.

20 thoughts on “Messy? Who me?

  1. Glenn A. Buttkus's avatar Glenn A. Buttkus June 14, 2021 / 4:13 pm

    Having 9 grandchildren, this is a familiar scenario, I like the playfulness in this.”Smudgekin” is my new favorite word.

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  2. rog's avatar rogblog666 June 14, 2021 / 4:45 pm

    i have a pic of my grown up son in that very messy state great memories.thanks

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  3. Ron.'s avatar Ron. June 14, 2021 / 5:16 pm

    Doesn’t get easier with age, in many cases: In most instances, I request a spoon for my cone. It’s either that, or trim the moustache (not bloody likely!)

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  4. Mish's avatar Mish June 14, 2021 / 5:31 pm

    “Smudgekin” ….such a fun spin on the word but I did laugh out loud at “nose-in-cone finale”. Good one.

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  5. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry June 14, 2021 / 6:28 pm

    Smudgekin’s world indeed! They are so cute getting all smudged up with chocolate from ear to ear!

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  6. Grace's avatar Grace June 14, 2021 / 7:50 pm

    Delightful Lillian. A summer fun treat for the kids for sure.

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  7. Bodhirose's avatar Bodhirose June 14, 2021 / 8:03 pm

    Aw, toddlers and ice cream, a very messy combo indeed! Love your smudgekin word, Lill!

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  8. kaykuala h's avatar kaykuala h June 14, 2021 / 8:42 pm

    Love the way you make ‘smudges’ seem like art, Lillian! Other uninformed mothers might smack them for the ‘mess’

    Hank

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  9. Nancy Jahnke's avatar Nancy Jahnke June 14, 2021 / 10:09 pm

    🥰

    Sent from my iPhone

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  10. triciasankey's avatar Tricia Sankey June 14, 2021 / 11:53 pm

    😋 The repetition of lick and drip really works. “nose-in-cone finale” is the kind of description that is going to ruin my diet! 😆

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  11. Ingrid's avatar Ingrid June 15, 2021 / 1:31 am

    Happy days! Messy but delightful. My almost-four-year-old still gets an ice cream goatee, so I let him enjoy it 🙂

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  12. areadingwriter's avatar areadingwriter June 15, 2021 / 6:02 am

    this poem left me with a smile. you have the most adorable variation of this word, Ms. Lillian.

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  13. storiesofpetey's avatar storiesofpetey June 15, 2021 / 6:38 am

    So familiar..lol. Brings a smile to my face😊 Thank you for the moment of joy!

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  14. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa June 15, 2021 / 2:10 pm

    Ha love the work smudgekin, I usually get mine in a dish it always melts faster than I can eat it.

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  15. writingwhatnots's avatar writingwhatnots June 16, 2021 / 3:48 am

    Oh yes. The only to eat an ice-cream. Love the photo of the ‘smudgkin’.

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  16. writingwhatnots's avatar writingwhatnots June 16, 2021 / 3:49 am

    Sorry, should have said ‘the only WAY to eat an ice cream!’

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