Streaming Thoughts on “Ice”

Toddler’s rosy ice-cold cheeks.
Zooming, bumping down icy hills
on cafeteria-trays as sleds.
Crack-the-whip flying on ice skates.
Chocolate ganache, icing supreme,
marguerita on the rocks, please.
Icicle turrets on snow castles,
I scream for ice cream.
Smiling me,
at a list like this.

Written for Quadrille Monday at dVerse, the virtual pub for poets around the globe. Today Mish asks us to include the word “ice” or a form of the word, in our poem of exactly 44 words, sans title. Image by annca from Pixabay

15 thoughts on “Streaming Thoughts on “Ice”

  1. sarahsouthwest's avatar sarahsouthwest January 23, 2023 / 3:07 pm

    What a lovely, cheerful, life-enhancing list poem! All the very best frozen things.

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881 January 23, 2023 / 3:09 pm

    A lovely stream of consciousness list of iciness, Lill! I love the rush of excitement in the sledding and skating. I smiled at ‘I scream for ice cream’ and now I have that song in my head.

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  3. Mish's avatar Mish January 23, 2023 / 3:24 pm

    Your streaming thoughts reminded me of “these are a few of my favourite things”. Wonderful.
    Cafeteria trays as sleds?? I thought I’d traveled down snowy hills on every imaginable object….haha! Love it.

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  4. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry January 23, 2023 / 4:13 pm

    I love it. Your list of icy things brought back good memories.

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  5. Ron.'s avatar Ron. January 23, 2023 / 5:16 pm

    Nicely icy, Lillian

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  6. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa January 23, 2023 / 10:21 pm

    Margarita on the rocks works for me.

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  7. Katie Frances Hartless's avatar K.Hartless January 24, 2023 / 12:09 am

    Such fun imagery. Margarita dreams for me, now.

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  8. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith January 24, 2023 / 6:12 am

    Such a joyous steam–you capture the warmth of winter.

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  9. Colleen Chesebro's avatar Colleen M. Chesebro January 24, 2023 / 2:17 pm

    Thanks for the glorious reminder of my winter memories. Icy margarita, please.

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