For the Love of Harold

Widowed at eighty-three, she didn’t cry until they closed the lid on Harold. Never to see him again in that beautiful dark blue suit, worn on so many of their date nights over many years. The love of her life, resting in the Peters-Carmody Funeral Home, before the hearse would take him away.

Five years later, Maud Smith noticed an elderly woman sitting in the front row of mourners patiently waiting for Father David to begin the rosary. She approached the funeral director and quietly asked “Who is that old woman in the front row? Why is she sitting with my family?”

“That’s Mrs. Crowley, ma’am. She often comes to our viewings if the decedent is male. Her husband Harold’s service was here five years ago. I think she imagines him lying there, near her again. You see, to her, death is quite romantic.”

Written for dVerse, the virtual pub for poets around the globe. Bjorn is hosting Prosery Monday, where a line from poetry is given and then must be used, word for word, in a piece of prose that is 144 words or less, sans title. Today the line is from Bob Dylan, “To her, death is quite romantic.”
Image from Pixabay.com

24 thoughts on “For the Love of Harold

  1. sanaarizvi October 10, 2022 / 3:43 pm

    This is incredibly poignant, Lillian! You paint a vivid scene here, I can picture here sitting in the front row so clearly! Gorgeous use of the line by Dylan ❤❤

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      • sanaarizvi October 12, 2022 / 10:51 am

        You’re most welcome 🙂

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  2. Grace October 10, 2022 / 4:16 pm

    That is really sad but very comforting Lillian. The grieving can be very long.

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    • lillian October 10, 2022 / 7:11 pm

      I learned a long time ago, when my brother died at age 51 and I never saw my mother shed a tear, we all grieve in different ways.

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    • lillian October 10, 2022 / 7:11 pm

      Thank you Bjorn! Just putting together our photo diary from our cruise and you and Lotta are in it! 🙂

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  3. msjadeli October 10, 2022 / 6:07 pm

    If she finds comfort in the practice, good for her. I guess the grieving family could perhaps find comfort from her also?

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  4. rothpoetry October 10, 2022 / 7:01 pm

    Very well done, Lillian! I love the great twist in the story at the end.

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    • lillian October 11, 2022 / 2:59 pm

      Exactly. And I truly believe, we all grieve in different ways.

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  5. Raivenne October 10, 2022 / 7:46 pm

    That’s sad and yet sweet, Lillian. I can see that actually happening .

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    • lillian October 11, 2022 / 3:00 pm

      Yes….even though Maud and Harold are fictional here (or should I say poetic?), they could be real. I think so too.

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  6. Truedessa October 10, 2022 / 9:04 pm

    This is beautifully sad, the heart needs to heal in its own way.

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    • lillian October 11, 2022 / 3:01 pm

      Yes, I agree. I’ve always thought we all grieve in different ways. Just because someone is smiling, out and about, it does not mean they’re “over” their grief.

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  7. kim881 October 11, 2022 / 3:27 am

    I agree with Grace that your story is sad but comforting, Lill. And I love that you used the names Harold and Maud, one of my favourite films, in which the eponymous characters were regular funeral visitors. The music in that film was great, too.

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    • lillian October 11, 2022 / 3:01 pm

      Yes….I love that movie as well. Thank you for your comments here, Kim. So good to have you back!

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  8. Jane Dougherty October 11, 2022 / 3:41 am

    At 88 she shouldn’t have long to wait for her own romantic departure. I wonder if she’ll feel the same then?

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    • lillian October 11, 2022 / 3:02 pm

      hmmmm….I wonder. Of course, she’d be gone…so the question is, who will grieve for her?

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      • Jane Dougherty October 11, 2022 / 3:56 pm

        She’d have to tip the nuns off in advance, and pay for a few novenas

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  9. Gillena Cox October 11, 2022 / 7:37 am

    Interesting 😊
    Much❤love

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