They boil in hatred,
witness disregard of life
violence erupts.
She simmers in pain,
cancer invades her body,
prayer uplifts her soul.
December Poetry Challenge, Day 1: Write a two phrase poem: begin by looking out and away from yourself. What do you see, hear, find? Then narrow your gaze, almost as if you were tightening the focus on a movie camera. What’s close at hand? Make these two elements speak as one poem. Employ brevity. Dedicated to a dear friend.
lillian the home poet 
This is a splendid poem. You did very well with that prompt.
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Your compliment is so appreciated! Thankful I am this early morn.
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The individual tragedy is so well underlined after creating a background of collective drama… I really like how you managed to convey the succinct, yet powerful message, Lillian.
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So very nice to see your response over my first cup of coffee this morning. You made my day, Ana. Many thanks!
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That’s perfect 🙂 I was also enjoying a nice cup of coffee while reading your poem.
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you have captured the essence of suffering in this one and it’s stunningly presented.
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Doesn’t seem quite right to hit Like on this. But your reply is so so appreciated. Thank you.
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I understand. You’re welcome.
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