I recognized it.
A little pocket of silence.
I was hiding,
feeling sad and brittle
and about seven thousand years old.
A cause for revolution,
all this swinging.
You wanna see pretty colors?
More razzle dazzle?
Be happy?
Just sit down,
find the balance.
Shut the door.
Cease your relentless participation.
Accept the best I can do.
Just
be.

Victoria is tending bar at dVerse today, the virtual pub for poets. She asks us to do some Erasure Poetry. A new form for me. We choose a book or text and by “erasing words” from it (or an alternative way to say it is by choosing words from it), make up a poem of our own. We cannot add our own words…all words must be from the book or text. Each line in Thank You, Elizabeth is an exact phrase from Elizabeth Gilbert’s Eat, Pray, Love. Punctuation is mine. Pub opens at 3 PM Boston time. Come join us!












