I recognized it.
A little pocket of silence.
I was hiding,
feeling sad and brittle
and about seven thousand years old.
A cause for revolution,
all this swinging.
You wanna see pretty colors?
More razzle dazzle?
Be happy?
Just sit down,
find the balance.
Shut the door.
Cease your relentless participation.
Accept the best I can do.
Just
be.
Victoria is tending bar at dVerse today, the virtual pub for poets. She asks us to do some Erasure Poetry. A new form for me. We choose a book or text and by “erasing words” from it (or an alternative way to say it is by choosing words from it), make up a poem of our own. We cannot add our own words…all words must be from the book or text. Each line in Thank You, Elizabeth is an exact phrase from Elizabeth Gilbert’s Eat, Pray, Love. Punctuation is mine. Pub opens at 3 PM Boston time. Come join us!
lillian the home poet 
I love this section:
“You wanna see pretty colors?
More razzle dazzle?
Be happy?
Just sit down,
find the balance.
Shut the door.
Cease your relentless participation.”
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Hah! Me too….a lesson for us all. Sometimes we just need to sit 🙂
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But some of us are mani(a)c(s) and can’t! 🙂
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I think you have more or less summarized the entirety of “Eat, Pray, Love” in this brief extraction. In fact, the final two words do it. Really well done, Lillian.
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Thank you, Victoria. This was a new form for me….and I was relieved to find out it didn’t have to be from just one page 🙂 Although those of you who distilled from one page are truly masters! 🙂
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One of my favorite books, by the way.
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This is a wonderful distillation… those two last words are great
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. . . and a lesson to us all. Just Be! 🙂
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A little pocket of silence….made me want to go and read the book.
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This recalled the movie to me. I loved the closure … Just be ! Well done.
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I liked the line: “Cease your relentless participation.”
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Just be. That ending is perfect Lillian ~
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You’re on a roll, Lill! Erasure poetry is fun and can produce such gems – like this one! I love the lines:
‘A little pocket of silence.
I was hiding,
feeling sad and brittle
and about seven thousand years old’
and
‘You wanna see pretty colors?
More razzle dazzle?’
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Lovely erasure, Lillian, and great advice!
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Just sit down
Find the balance
Shut the door
Cease your relentless participation
Love this. I find myself there so more often now.
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Nicely done.
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Groovy-sweet! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀😎😎😎
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Hi greatt reading your blog
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