On this All Hallow’s Eve . . .

Robert and Emma lie undetected in the shed beside the town’s garbage dump. Dead for centuries, their spirits are still quite lively. Their love, strong as the day they wed in 1801. They find the stench of garbage more pleasing than their decomposition all those years ago.

Their skeletal rattlings have always scared away the curious. But the night of October 31st 2026, something was different. Hundreds of critters who tunneled into their space as frost took hold, suddenly breathed their last. The dead were settling in under their mud roof and something was shuffling overhead as the wind began to howl. Bats swooped nearby. Children screamed. Witches from the local coven flew overhead, cackling, screaming their names.

Energized, they stood up. Stretched tall. Their phalenges reached out and entwined. They’d waited centuries for the night of the waking dead. Surely this was it.


Written for Prosery Monday on dVerse, the virtual pub for poets around the globe.

Today Kim gives us the line “The dead were settling in under their mud roof and something was shuffling overhead” from Alice Oswald’s poem Body. We’re to use that line, word for word, within a piece of prose or flash fiction that is a maximum of 144 words in length. Extra credit if the story is exactly 144 words in length. Mine is!

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The Innocence of Youth Unveiled

We were raised in families where the television show “Father Knows Best” was also the way of the household. Travel happened twice a year for me: a visit to my grandparents’ home in Florida and a vacation week in the Wisconsin Dells. I always sent her a postcard. It never dawned on me that I lived in a white privileged world and she did not.

I went to college and she left home. She took jobs where she found them. Eking out a living, then moving on. She sent postcards along the way. In 1963, from DC. She’d heard MLK’s “I Have a Dream”. In 1969, from the Catskill Mountains. She’d found love and acceptance at Woodstock. “The granites and schists of my dark and stubborn country have accepted me. My new partner and I can be ourselves here. Come visit!” I never did.

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Written for Prosery Monday at dVerse, the virtual pub for poets around the globe. Prosery Mondays are the only prompts where writers are asked to write prose, not poetry. We’re given a line from a poem and we’re asked to insert it, word for word, within a piece of flash fiction that is 144 words or less in length. Today Merril gives us the line “The granites and schists of my dark and stubborn country” from Nan Shepherd’s poem “The Hill Burns”

The Innocence of Youth Unveiled is fiction. It is not autobiographical.