Living in the Wrong Time

She seeks answers in the landscape,
this early nineteenth century woman.

Firmly corseted, demure by training,
constrained by society’s expectations.
She pauses deliberately on crude dirt path,
having followed it through rolling hills
amidst surrounding trees.

Would that she could stretch her limbs,
bloom anew, sway in every fresh breeze.
Remain firmly rooted defying threatening storms.
But she is here. Painted in her times.
Resolutely she turns, walks off canvas,
slowly returns home.

How much joy she would have
if in this moment she could know,
her female counterparts
will change the world.


Written for Tuesday Poetics at dVerse, the virtual home for poets around the world. Today Melissa asks us to consider the artist Henri Rousseau and provides us with several of his works to motivate our poetry. I’ve chosen his painting, La Promenade dans la Foret (The Walk in the Forest) c 1886.

10 thoughts on “Living in the Wrong Time

  1. kim881's avatar kim881 July 28, 2026 / 3:12 pm

    If only, Lill, perhaps this world would be different.

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  2. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox July 28, 2026 / 4:13 pm

    luv your dynamite end line

    much love

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  3. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay July 28, 2026 / 4:50 pm

    A poem full of hope! These lines stand out to me:

    “Would that she could stretch her limbs,
    bloom anew,”

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  4. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa July 28, 2026 / 8:52 pm

    You have captured the time period perfectly. Women indeed were required to live up to certain restraints and expectations. Thank goodness there were bold women who stepped forward and paved the path for change.

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  5. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry July 28, 2026 / 9:25 pm

    I really like the historical aspect you brought into your interpretation of the painting. Well done!

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  6. shaun tenzenmen's avatar shaun tenzenmen July 28, 2026 / 11:14 pm

    In my mind, women already rule the world and us men still haven’t quite accepted it yet.

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  7. Reena Saxena's avatar Reena Saxena July 29, 2026 / 5:21 am

    The first thought that struck me on seeing this picture was that the attire is not appropriate for a forest walk. You elaborated on it well.

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  8. lifelessons's avatar lifelessons July 29, 2026 / 8:53 am

    The remarkable difference between responses to this painting show the power of art to take us into ourselves. Your response included!

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  9. Mish's avatar Mish July 29, 2026 / 4:07 pm

    Oh you brought Rousseau’s painting to life with descriptions so fitting of the times. I could feel her longing. I LOVE how she walks off the canvass!

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