Living in the Wrong Time

She seeks answers in the landscape,
this early nineteenth century woman.

Firmly corseted, demure by training,
constrained by society’s expectations.
She pauses deliberately on crude dirt path,
having followed it through rolling hills
amidst surrounding trees.

Would that she could stretch her limbs,
bloom anew, sway in every fresh breeze.
Remain firmly rooted defying threatening storms.
But she is here. Painted in her times.
Resolutely she turns, walks off canvas,
slowly returns home.

How much joy she would have
if in this moment she could know,
her female counterparts
will change the world.


Written for Tuesday Poetics at dVerse, the virtual home for poets around the world. Today Melissa asks us to consider the artist Henri Rousseau and provides us with several of his works to motivate our poetry. I’ve chosen his painting, La Promenade dans la Foret (The Walk in the Forest) c 1886.

4 thoughts on “Living in the Wrong Time

  1. kim881's avatar kim881 July 28, 2026 / 3:12 pm

    If only, Lill, perhaps this world would be different.

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  2. thetigressawakens's avatar thetigressawakens July 28, 2026 / 3:22 pm

    What a wonderful intrepretation! I like the hope and final stanzas take away, well done🩵

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  3. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox July 28, 2026 / 4:13 pm

    luv your dynamite end line

    much love

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  4. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay July 28, 2026 / 4:50 pm

    A poem full of hope! These lines stand out to me:

    “Would that she could stretch her limbs,
    bloom anew,”

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