A Villanelle Walk

Come walk this path with me
through wooded quiet calm.
It will lend its peace to you.

Canopy of green leaves gleam
as sunlight filters through.
Come walk this path with me.

Morning’s quiet coolness
will ease and soothe the soul.
It will lend its peace to you.

Some call it forest bathing,
five senses engaged in meditation.
Come walk this path with me.

Immerse ourselves knowing
Earth’s beauty nurtures best.
It will lend its peace to you.

Escape the city’s frenzy
find nature’s solemnity.
Come walk this path with me,
it will lend its peace to you.

NAPOWRIMO Day 22. Prompt is to write a Villanelle. Photo from a vacation we took some years ago.

Villanelle: A French verse form consisting of five three-line stanzas and a final quatrain. The first and third lines of the first stanza repeat alternately in the following stanzas. And these two lines form the final couplet in the quatrain. It’s a poetic sudoku!

14 thoughts on “A Villanelle Walk

  1. SelmaMartin's avatar SelmaMartin April 23, 2026 / 8:20 am

    So peaceful. Indeed a forest bathing. Thanks for sharing.

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    • lillian's avatar lillian April 23, 2026 / 11:29 am

      Thank you! So glad you enjoyed.

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  2. addasayers's avatar addasayers April 23, 2026 / 8:56 am

    So soothing, peaceful and calming… I would gladly walk this path with you .. thank you

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    • lillian's avatar lillian April 23, 2026 / 11:29 am

      Soooo happy you’re reading my poetry, Adda. Thank you!

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  3. Lindsey Ein's avatar Lindsey Ein April 23, 2026 / 9:31 am

    First rate, Lill! Again, you beat me to it!😊

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    • lillian's avatar lillian April 23, 2026 / 11:30 am

      Thank you! PS: I’m a VERY early riser!

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  4. VJ's avatar VJ April 23, 2026 / 9:34 am

    Absolutely sublime

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  5. pittmanjz's avatar pittmanjz April 23, 2026 / 10:43 am

    Lill, Where was that lovely photo taken? Joyce Pittman

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    • lillian's avatar lillian April 23, 2026 / 11:31 am

      At Stan Hywet Hall and Gardens in Ohio! When we visited our neice, Kim. She’s a history professor at Kent State.

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    • lillian's avatar lillian April 23, 2026 / 11:31 am

      It was indeed! Glad that came across in the poem.

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    • lillian's avatar lillian April 23, 2026 / 11:32 am

      Thank you, Melanie. So glad you enjoyed!

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