Nature’s Way

Dew drops on petals.
Nature’s evidence of rain
or her sweet soft tears
singing Cry Me a River
for humanity’s deaf ear?


Written for NAPOWRIMO (National Poetry Month) day 1’s prompt. We’re to write a Tanka: an ancient Japanese poetic form composed of five lines with the syllable content as follows: 5/7/5/7/7. “It’s like a haiku that decided to keep on going!”

Photo taken last month in San Diego. “Cry Me a River” is an American song first published in 1953 and made famous in 1955 when recorded and sung by Julie London. Justin Timberlake’s 2002 hit “Cry Me a River” is not at all musically similar. London’s version is known as a torch song….listen below!

3 thoughts on “Nature’s Way

  1. kim881's avatar kim881 April 1, 2026 / 9:24 am

    We need Nature to do something drastic to rectify the situation, Lill. I keep hoping.

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  2. SelmaMartin's avatar SelmaMartin April 1, 2026 / 9:56 am

    nature is crying. I do hope we would all notice. But even shedding tears she blooms for us. A real Mother. Lovely tanka, Lillian. Thanks.

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  3. Lindsey Ein's avatar Lindsey Ein April 1, 2026 / 10:08 am

    Love It. Well done my friend!👏🏻

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