Time Passes: Petals Tell the Tale

parched petals litter tabletop
tears cling to eyelashes
skeletal tree limbs crack
as blizzard careens from sky

sunrise announces joyful day
as cherry blossoms bloom
yes bedazzled by love
bouquet gifted, she smiles

seasons and emotions change
age wizens beauty
Your love,
her always

Written for dVerse, the virtual pub for poets around the globe. Today I’m hosting our Quadrille Monday and asking folks to write a poem of EXACTLY 44 words, sans title, and include the word “petals” (or a form of the word) in the body of the poem. A synonym will not suffice.

Image by Andreas Lischka from Pixabay

22 thoughts on “Time Passes: Petals Tell the Tale

  1. kim881's avatar kim881 September 22, 2025 / 3:09 pm

    Petals are petals no matter the age or season, Lill. I love the alliterative sounds in ‘parched petals litter tabletop’.

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  2. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi September 22, 2025 / 3:15 pm

    This is exquisitely drawn, Lillian! I too love the sounds in “parched petals litter tabletop.”❤️❤️

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  3. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox September 22, 2025 / 3:45 pm

    so romantic, luv it

    Thanks for dropping by to read mine. I did a small edit, i changed bouquet to posey

    much♡love

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  4. lynn__'s avatar lynn__ September 22, 2025 / 3:47 pm

    I prefer the cherry blossoms over the blizzard but every season has a purpose 🙂

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  5. rog's avatar rog September 22, 2025 / 4:04 pm

    cherry blossoms always cheer me up in the spring.

    parched petals litter table top so well describes the feel of autumn

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  6. jaerose37's avatar jaerose37 September 22, 2025 / 6:18 pm

    Like a skeleton tree your words convey so much of the season – beautiful reflections – Jae

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  7. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry September 22, 2025 / 6:34 pm

    Beautiful, Lillian. It is amazing to watch the petals fall!

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  8. Ren's avatar Ren September 22, 2025 / 8:26 pm

    delicate … like petals 🙂

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  9. Ron.'s avatar Ron. September 22, 2025 / 8:35 pm

    “Marvelous,” he said, bowing deeply.

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  10. Christine Bolton's avatar Christine Bolton September 22, 2025 / 10:31 pm

    Pretty blossoms telling a story. Lovely Lillian, as is tonight’s prompt 🌺

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  11. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 September 23, 2025 / 6:24 am

    A nectar drop of love and blossom – beautiful, Lillian…

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  12. Mish's avatar Mish September 23, 2025 / 10:56 am

    So many seasons of love…and you captured them here so beautifully here. Especially love ….”skeletal tree limbs crack
    as blizzard careens from sky”

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  13. robertawrites235681907's avatar robertawrites235681907 September 23, 2025 / 1:11 pm

    Hi Lillian, it is nice to see you back. I hope you have recovered well. A delightful poem

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  14. Helen's avatar hdwoonie2337a7ee75a6 September 23, 2025 / 5:27 pm

    Lillian, your quadrille is gorgeous and the last stanza took my breath away …. cheers, and continue doing what you are doing to heal. Cheers.

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  15. purplepeninportland's avatar purplepeninportland September 25, 2025 / 7:51 pm

    I love, parched petals litter tabletop

    Cherry blossoms never fail to make me smile.

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  16. pvcann's avatar pvcann September 29, 2025 / 11:44 am

    The transforming of what lies desolate, the uplift is palpable.

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  17. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay October 20, 2025 / 5:34 pm

    Lillian, I love the tears clinging to eyelashes and the skeletal tree limbs.❤️

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