That Portrait

Chiseled jaw, high cheekbones.
Tired eyes glance sideways,
energy depleted. Joyless.
Her exquisitely shaped lips
rouged deepest red.
Closed, not pursed, yet somehow gentle.
Dark tendrils hang beside her face,
drooping as if exhausted.
Indigo headscarf appears torn.
Disheveled from constant wear
or symbolic of war torn life.
Blues bleed pale into background.
Not thickened red of blood
but bleeding nonetheless.
One lustrous pearl earring hangs coldly,
boldly iridescent in a palette of darkness.
Did she really wear it for the sitting?
Or is it the artist’s one defiant stroke?

Written for Open Link Night at dVerse, the virtual pub for poets around the globe.
Image from Pixabay.com

Want to hear and watch poets from around the globe read a poem aloud? Come join us as I host dVerse LIVE on Saturday, June 21st from 10 to 11 AM Boston time. Last time I hosted, we had folks from Sweden, Pakistan, all across the US, Kenya, the UK, Australia, South Africa, and Trinidad Tobago! Come read a poem of your own or just sit in to listen. We’re a friendly bunch. The more the merrier!

To join us LIVE on Saturday, June 21st from 10 to 11 AM Boston time, just click here and scroll down to the LIVE LINK. Hope to see you there!

19 thoughts on “That Portrait

  1. kim881's avatar kim881 June 19, 2025 / 3:18 pm

    An amazing capture, Lill, and I love the use of colour! This alliterative line is so effective:

    ‘Blues bleed pale into background’

    and

    ‘One lustrous pearl earring hangs coldly,
    boldly iridescent in a palette of darkness.’

    Liked by 1 person

  2. writingpresence's avatar writingpresence June 19, 2025 / 3:45 pm

    Yes, there are many layers of story in that image – and in your rich and silky unravelling of it, Lillian.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li June 19, 2025 / 4:02 pm

    Your poem is a careful study of the subject. I particularly like the last 4 lines. Scarlett merged a famous painting makes good poetry fodder.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Stine Writing and Miniatures's avatar Stine Writing and Miniatures June 19, 2025 / 4:26 pm

    I love the question about the earring since it stands out so noticeably but doesn’t necessarily fit with the picture, it wouldn’t be missed had it not been there.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi June 19, 2025 / 4:44 pm

    This is incredibly stunning work done, Lillian! Wow! So much to admire especially;

    “One lustrous pearl earring hangs coldly, boldly iridescent in a palette of darkness.” I was wondering about that too! ❤️❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Jennifer Wagner's avatar Jennifer Wagner June 19, 2025 / 5:04 pm

    You’ve described her well! That earring does pop out, like a defiant statement, a light spot in contrast to the darker elements of the image. Well told.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry June 19, 2025 / 5:05 pm

    I love what you did with the picture, Lillian. So many questions as we look at this beautiful girl. I was captivated by her when I read through your prompt today.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. crazy4yarn2's avatar crazy4yarn2 June 19, 2025 / 5:20 pm

    What a juicy poem, Lillian! Beautiful writing.

    Like

  9. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa June 19, 2025 / 8:49 pm

    You have captured her story as it bleeds across the page. The one pearl earring symbolic of purity and innocence even though we can sense she has had a difficult journey in life.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay June 19, 2025 / 9:25 pm

    There is a tension in your poem that perfectly captures the resonance of the art.

    Like

  11. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 June 20, 2025 / 6:40 am

    You show how ekphrastic is done Lillian – mesmerising…

    Like

  12. marialberg's avatar marialberg June 20, 2025 / 5:43 pm

    I like the use of defiant in the final line, bringing in the truth that the artist controls the reality of the image.

    Like

  13. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith June 21, 2025 / 6:08 am

    A wonderful exploration of the image. Your final question lingers, Lillian. The painting is so dark–and that pearl earring does seem defiant.

    Like

Leave a reply to Truedessa Cancel reply