Our Road

Our road, rain slicked by spring storms,
slippery driving through rivulets.
Garden store trips for flower flats
bring beautiful garden blooms.

Summer haze simmers above its asphalt.
Seashore drives with our kids
from toddler through teenage years.
Back seat songsters to quiet texters.

Our road, dressed in autumn’s finest.
Bright yellows to burnt oranges,
like bouncing shimmering can-can skirts.
Costume changes in passing seasons.

Difficult on many winter days,
snow covered, sometimes impassable.
Homebound, cocooned by drifts,
content to savor relaxing by the fire.

Our road,
our passage to and from.
Just the two of us. Then three, then four.
Now as two again.

The straightaways
always faster than any other part,
made distance and time fly by.
Used to be our favorite parts.

Our road, these days?
We prefer the meandering parts.
The curves and bends that slow us down,
taking longer to reach the end of the road.

It’s Open Link Night at dVerse, the virtual pub for poets around the globe. Today, Sanaa asks us to post any poem of our choosing, or an ekphrastic poem related to the image she provided above.

NOTE: Sanaa will also host dVerse LIVE on Saturday, from 10 to 11 AM New York time. Look HERE for an embedded link that will take you with audio and video to a LIVE meeting where folks from around the globe will read a poem of their choosing aloud to the group – OR just drop in to watch and listen. The more the merrier!

29 thoughts on “Our Road

  1. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi October 10, 2024 / 3:11 pm

    This is absolutely stunning, Lillian! I especially admire this part; “Our road, dressed in autumn’s finest. Bright yellows to burnt oranges, like bouncing shimmering can-can skirts.” ❤️❤️

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    • lillian's avatar lillian October 11, 2024 / 8:00 am

      Thanks, Sanaa. I liked the image and immediately thought of “the road not taken” by Sandburg, I believe and then jumped to the road taken…and Our Road came out of my pen! 🙂

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881 October 10, 2024 / 3:12 pm

    I see you went ekphrastic with the mini prompt, Lill, and love how the road led you through the seasons. I especially love the sizzling sibilance of ‘summer haze simmers above its asphalt’, and the colour and movement in ‘bright yellows to burnt oranges, like bouncing shimmering can-can skirts’. seasonal costume changes indeed!

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    • lillian's avatar lillian October 11, 2024 / 8:13 am

      Thanks, Kim. I, like you, do enjoy Ekphrastic prompts. Sometimes they just hit you and something pops into your psyche about a particular illustration and sculpture or piece of artwork. 🙂

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      • kim881's avatar kim881 October 12, 2024 / 9:22 am

        My pleasure, Lill. Every now and then an ekphrastic prompt comes along and it just hits all the buttons.

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  3. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged October 10, 2024 / 3:18 pm

    What a lovely ekphrastic, Lillian! The way you take us down the road through various seasons is brilliant.

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  4. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith October 10, 2024 / 3:34 pm

    A lovely poem, Lillian. I especially like the final stanza:

    “We prefer the meandering parts.
    The curves and bends that slow us down,
    taking longer to reach the end of the road.”

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    • lillian's avatar lillian October 11, 2024 / 8:14 am

      ….and even though this isn’t “our road” and we don’t even have a “road” living right in the city of Boston as we do, in a highrise, I do find the idea of slowing down to “smell the roses” as the saying goes, a delightful perogative of being a septuagenarian!

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      • merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith October 12, 2024 / 12:35 pm

        Yes, I understood all that, and I agree, Lill. You do seem to enjoy life. And really, what would be the purposeful of speeding along and not slowing down to enjoy it while you can?!

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  5. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 October 10, 2024 / 3:51 pm

    You not only take us down your road, Lillian but you take us through seasons and time to show us why and how you love the road – stunning…

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    • lillian's avatar lillian October 11, 2024 / 8:17 am

      Even though we don’t have a road of our own….I do this the idea of slowing down in older age is a delightful perogative!

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  6. Ain - UA's avatar Ain October 10, 2024 / 5:19 pm

    Beautifully descriptive…slowly unwinding, slower, and slower..such is life

    Lovely rhythm to this piece

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    • lillian's avatar lillian October 11, 2024 / 8:17 am

      Thank you! Yes….although we live in the middle of the city (Boston) in a high rise – so we don’t really have a “road” of our own – I do think slowing down is a delightful perogative of getting older! 🙂

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  7. crazy4yarn2's avatar crazy4yarn2 October 10, 2024 / 5:23 pm

    Fantastic road trip, Lillian!

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  8. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay October 10, 2024 / 8:28 pm

    So beautiful, a metaphor for life and its changing journeys down different roads, yet all roads end up leading to the same place. I love the idea of autumn’s finest “like bouncing shimmering can-can skirts.
    Costume changes in passing seasons.”

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    • lillian's avatar lillian October 11, 2024 / 8:19 am

      Yep….even though the image isn’t “our road”….life is a journey and I truly believe one of the delights of aging, is the perogative to slow down 🙂

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  9. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa October 10, 2024 / 8:51 pm

    Beautiful journey through the seasonal road of life.

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    • lillian's avatar lillian October 11, 2024 / 8:19 am

      Glad you enjoyed, Truedessa!

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  10. marialberg's avatar marialberg October 10, 2024 / 9:15 pm

    Wow, I love this. So many wonderful images. And “the straightaways the fastest parts” really hit me.

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    • lillian's avatar lillian October 11, 2024 / 8:20 am

      Thank you, Bjorn! I do believe one of the delights of aging, and of rejuvenating (never say re-tireing!) is the perogative to slow down 🙂

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  11. 1renrising's avatar ren October 11, 2024 / 10:29 am

    a beautiful travel through time ❤

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  12. M's avatar M October 13, 2024 / 3:26 pm

    very much agree with your final stanza ~

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