Black Woman with Peonies

Fresh peonies, sir? For the lady in your life?
Bouquet of crimson and gold tulips
for your table, ma’am?
She walks the market every morning,
flower basket in hand .

Cotton sweater wards off cool breeze.
Delicately notched white linen collar,
embroidered in tiny stitches,
frames her stoic sable face.
Modest madras head scarf
reveals pomegranate-red earrings
hanging below her earlobes.

She approaches early shoppers,
queries softly. Hides her anxiety.
These beautiful blooms
her livelihood.


Written for OLN at dVerse, the virtual pub for poets around the globe. OLN is Open Link Night when writers can post any one poem of their choosing OR use the optional prompt given.

As host for OLN today, I’ve provided an optional ekphrastic prompt. An ekphrastic poem is one that is inspired by a piece of art so today, I’ve provided the painting, Black Woman with Peonies by French Impressionist painter, Frederic Bazille. Born in 1841, he created this beautiful painting in 1870, the last year of his life.

Consider this an INVITATION!
I’m also hosting dVerse LIVE on Saturday, May 11th from 10 to 11 AM Boston time.
Folks from across the globe participate as we meet with audio and video for an hour. Each attendee is welcome to read a poem of their choice OR they can simply come by to watch and listen. We’re a very friendly bunch! One of the last sessions I hosted had folks from across the US, Pakistan, the UK, Sweden, Kenya, Australia, Trinidad Tobago, India, and Finland! If you’d like to join us click on the link below on Saturday, May 11th – beginning at 10 AM.

https://meet.google.com/pxr-nobe-oir

Hope to see you Saturday morning!

PS: if the link above doesn’t work, click here which will take you directly to the dVerse page that includes a direct link to the LIVE session!

35 thoughts on “Black Woman with Peonies

  1. kim881's avatar kim881 May 9, 2024 / 3:18 pm

    I love all the detail in your ekphrastic poem, Lill, from the cotton sweater with its ‘delicately notched white linen collar, embroidered in tiny stitches’ to the ‘modest madras head scarf’ and ‘pomegranate-red earrings’.

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  2. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli May 9, 2024 / 4:24 pm

    Good characterization of the woman in the image.

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  3. Helen's avatar Helen May 9, 2024 / 4:45 pm

    You described this lovely woman with perfect poetry, sigh. I hope you read this to us Saturday.

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    • lillian's avatar lillian May 9, 2024 / 5:02 pm

      So glad you enjoyed! 🙂 And glad you will be with us at our LIVE session Saturday!

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  4. Rob Kistner's avatar Rob Kistner May 9, 2024 / 5:15 pm

    Wonderful ekphrastic Lil. You faithfully captured the image my friend. 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼

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    • lillian's avatar lillian May 9, 2024 / 5:46 pm

      Thank you, Rob. Look forward to seeing you Saturday at dVerse LIVE.

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  5. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa May 9, 2024 / 6:27 pm

    You have found a piece of her story. Wonderfully woven.

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    • lillian's avatar lillian May 10, 2024 / 1:01 pm

      Thank you, Truedessa. I truly love the painting!

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  6. Jennifer Wagner's avatar Jennifer Wagner May 9, 2024 / 7:07 pm

    I’d buy some flowers from her! You’ve described her perfectly, Lillian, in a colorful poetic snapshot.

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    • lillian's avatar lillian May 10, 2024 / 1:01 pm

      She is a beautiful woman! Glad you enjoyed the poem.

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    • lillian's avatar lillian May 10, 2024 / 1:02 pm

      Thank you, Dwight! Looking forward to seeing you at our LIVE session!

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  7. Laura Bloomsbury's avatar Laura Bloomsbury May 10, 2024 / 4:13 am

    both the artist and you have drawn her anxiety so clearly that we hardly notice the lovely peonies

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    • lillian's avatar lillian May 10, 2024 / 1:03 pm

      Who doesn’t love Eliza Doolittle???? 🙂

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  8. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi May 10, 2024 / 8:48 am

    I love the sensitivity with which this poem is penned, Lillian! 🩷🩷 Especially moved by; “Delicately notched white linen collar, embroidered in tiny stitches, frames her stoic sable face.”

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    • lillian's avatar lillian May 10, 2024 / 1:03 pm

      Thank you, Sanaa. See you Saturday LIVE!

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  9. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 May 10, 2024 / 10:39 am

    Yes – the beauty of the flowers is not enough to hide the worry in the woman’s eyes…

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    • lillian's avatar lillian May 10, 2024 / 1:03 pm

      Thank you so much. I truly love the painting!

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  10. Colleen@ LOOSELEAFNOTES's avatar Colleen@ LOOSELEAFNOTES May 10, 2024 / 1:22 pm

    The flowers are wonderful. The face is a study.

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  11. Rob Kistner's avatar Rob Kistner May 11, 2024 / 9:42 am

    Hi Lil — Kathy wanted to leave early for the airport, so will miss you this morning. Have a great “live” community…🙂✌🏼🫶🏼

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    • Helen's avatar Helen May 11, 2024 / 11:14 am

      Missed you! It wasn’t a large group, but a great group!!!

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  12. Helen's avatar Helen May 11, 2024 / 11:13 am

    Great job hosting Open Link, Lillian!!! Cheers!

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    • Helen's avatar Helen May 11, 2024 / 11:34 am

      Oh boys will always dream… 🙂 yes those boys will need to sleep with their hands on the blanket.

      December 4, 2015 from Bjorn ///// LOL

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  13. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay May 27, 2024 / 9:41 pm

    I enjoyed the vivid imagery with which you bring her to life, Lillian.❤️🙏🏻

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