Can you picture it?

Boxes full of joy and laughter.
Clouds ready to burst,
rain happiness upon the earth.
See-through containers
brimming with peace.
Seed catalogues with special sales:
flowers that bloom understanding,
guaranteed to produce gargantuous yields.
Imagine with me, all these possibilities.
Which would you choose?


Written for Quadrille Monday at dVerse, the virtual pub for poets around the globe. Today I’m hosting, asking folks to include the word “imagine” in their poem of exactly 44 words, sans title.
Image created at Bing Create.

32 thoughts on “Can you picture it?

    • lillian's avatar lillian February 5, 2024 / 8:27 pm

      Living on the 7th floor of a high rise in the city, I miss our Iowa gardens!

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  1. Grace's avatar Grace February 5, 2024 / 3:08 pm

    Boxes filled with joy and laughter – Love it. Plus, peace and understanding. Also, love the AI imagery (you are getting better at it).

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    • lillian's avatar lillian February 5, 2024 / 8:28 pm

      Thanks, Grace. It is fun to work with the AI tool. So glad Bjorn introduced me to it!

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881 February 5, 2024 / 3:10 pm

    I used to love looking through seed catalogues with my grandfather – he let me choose, and I’m looking forward to sowing wild flowers in my garden. I love the words sounds in this line:
    ‘flowers that bloom understanding,
    guaranteed to produce gargantuous yields.’

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    • lillian's avatar lillian February 5, 2024 / 8:29 pm

      Thank you, Kim. Gardening is one thing I miss about our Iowa days. Living on the 7th floor of a high rise in Boston precludes that….but I do always buy at least three flowering plants to put on our balcony.

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      • kim881's avatar kim881 February 6, 2024 / 4:44 am

        That’s one of the reasons moving will be difficult, losing our wonderful garden.

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  3. rog's avatar rog February 5, 2024 / 3:25 pm

    i can picture spending hours in such a beautiful place.

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  4. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox February 5, 2024 / 5:08 pm

    Yes indeed i can plants those seeds of imagination with you. Thanks for dropppinh by my blog

    Much♡love

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    • lillian's avatar lillian February 5, 2024 / 8:30 pm

      Thank you, Gillena! I do think planting a garden with you would be much fun! I suspect we’d be chatting so much, we might not get too much done in a day 🙂

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    • lillian's avatar lillian February 5, 2024 / 8:31 pm

      Yep….these kinds of containers and boxes would be lovely, wouldn’t they?

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    • lillian's avatar lillian February 5, 2024 / 8:31 pm

      Happy to cause a spill here 🙂

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  5. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry February 5, 2024 / 8:11 pm

    That would be a utopia like no other! I love all the choices you present for hope and peace! Well done, Lillian.

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  6. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged February 6, 2024 / 12:48 am

    All! All of these! What a lovely uplifting verse, Lillian. Staying in a high rise does rob us the pleasure of gardening. Incidentally, I too live on the seventh floor.

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  7. Jane Dougherty's avatar Jane Dougherty February 6, 2024 / 6:27 am

    Wouldn’t it be wonderful if all of that happened naturally, and we didn’t have to wish for it?

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  8. brazannemuse's avatar brazannemuse February 6, 2024 / 7:57 am

    Yes I can picture it…. you spread a lovely piece of your imagination 😊

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  9. Bill's avatar Bill February 6, 2024 / 8:02 am

    A wonderful, hopeful, poem, Lillian. 🙂

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  10. Nick Allison's avatar Jake February 6, 2024 / 10:18 am

    Beautiful poem, Lillian!
    I absolutely love the line “See-through containers brimming with peace.”

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  11. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander February 6, 2024 / 1:56 pm

    Lillian, I feel like you’ve invited me to envision a future filled with joy, laughter, and abundant blessings! ❤

    ~David

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  12. Dora's avatar dorahak February 6, 2024 / 3:49 pm

    I’m greedy and want it all! But mostly I’m ready to see things to grow, “flowers that bloom understanding,/guaranteed to produce gargantuous yields”!! Love the exuberance of this poem, Lill.

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  13. Kim of Glover Gardens's avatar Kim of Glover Gardens February 6, 2024 / 8:00 pm

    I want those “See-through containers
    brimming with peace” and I want them now!

    Your poem is so light and colorful.

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  14. erbiage's avatar erbiage February 6, 2024 / 9:29 pm

    Oh Lillian this is so lovely. Let that rain fall often!

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  15. Ali Grimshaw's avatar Ali Grimshaw February 6, 2024 / 9:48 pm

    Peace blooming far and wide. Thanks for sharing your positive vision.

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  16. Carol C's avatar Carol C February 7, 2024 / 9:41 pm

    I’m going to be greedy and imagine all of it, Lillian!

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  17. purplepeninportland's avatar purplepeninportland February 10, 2024 / 7:55 pm

    I’ll take the see-through containers, and imagine what I might put inside.
    Great poem, Lillian!

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  18. pvcann's avatar pvcann February 12, 2024 / 10:14 am

    Inspiring stuff Lillian

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