In Flux

Mother sang about the man in the moon.
I don’t understand how he can wax and wane.
Like that maxim “love one another”
seems to wax and wane
if people are others instead of another.
Reality morphs, contorts,
always in flux.
Except for you.

Written for Quadrille Monday at dVerse where today we’re asked to use the word “moon” in our poem of exactly 44 words sans title. Image from Pixabay.com.

16 thoughts on “In Flux

  1. whimsygizmo's avatar whimsygizmo November 13, 2023 / 3:26 pm

    Nice! I love the pondering of “love one another.” All too true!

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881 November 13, 2023 / 3:37 pm

    The moon is the subject of so many songs, Lill, and yet the moon is just as mysterious as it was to the first humans. All the waxing and waning, the way
    ‘reality morphs, contorts, / always in flux’ is such a conundrum, it is wonderful to find a constant soul mate – and hang on to them.

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  3. Dora's avatar dorahak November 13, 2023 / 3:38 pm

    “if people are others instead of another”: thereby hangs a tale! That last line was so unexpectedly tender. Loved it.

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  4. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli November 13, 2023 / 3:50 pm

    You’re right, Lillian, the moon makes a lovely anchor.

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  5. Ordinary Person's avatar Ordinary Person November 13, 2023 / 5:22 pm

    I loved the last line. The piece can be interpreted as the moon being the only constant or a personal one evoking a lover. Beautiful. I agree, everything else is in flux.

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  6. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith November 13, 2023 / 5:59 pm

    Everything is in flux, but we’re lucky to find one constant. Lovely, Lill.

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  7. Arcadia Maria's avatar Arcadia Maria November 13, 2023 / 7:54 pm

    I like this take on the prompt. An intriguing piece. Nicely done poem.

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  8. Xan's avatar Xan November 13, 2023 / 8:32 pm

    This is so lovely.

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  9. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa November 13, 2023 / 9:57 pm

    The moon remains mysterious and we earth dwellers have always been attracted to many phases.

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  10. erbiage's avatar erbiage November 13, 2023 / 11:43 pm

    Love does not wax or wane, it’s just we can’t always see it from our perspective. A lively write

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  11. freyathewriter's avatar freyathewriter November 14, 2023 / 3:25 am

    Intriguing – you’ve made me think. I love the form and flow.

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  12. hdwoonie23's avatar Helen November 14, 2023 / 1:13 pm

    I could feel the undulation in your quadrille … lovely.

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  13. Die Reise meines Leben's avatar Die Reise meines Leben November 18, 2023 / 12:29 pm

    Love the last line – about the moon being the only constant while reality is changing constantly. Thanks for sharing!

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  14. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander November 19, 2023 / 9:22 am

    if people are others instead of another.

    Excellent, Lillian! ❤

    ~David

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