Impatient Autumn
ready to turn down the heat,
tired of leafy greens.
Dresses up in cancan skirts,
red-orange petticoats the trees.

Tanka: five line poem following a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic format.
Impatient Autumn
ready to turn down the heat,
tired of leafy greens.
Dresses up in cancan skirts,
red-orange petticoats the trees.
Tanka: five line poem following a 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic format.
Very beautiful
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #9: lillian’s latest #tanka!
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