That Feeling

dissonance
changing times
veins frozen still
warm love disappeared
vapid space adrift
begging please
alone here

Poem inspired by personifying the huge, monolith icebergs we recently saw in Antarctica. It seems to me that sometimes people feel like this.

4 thoughts on “That Feeling

  1. Victoria C. Slotto's avatar Victoria C. Slotto February 10, 2018 / 2:56 pm

    Such a chilling and sad effect. I bet we see more of your trip coming up. It’s good to have you “home.”

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  2. Adda's avatar Adda February 11, 2018 / 7:17 am

    I get it… 😦 A great comparison for a complex feeling. πŸ™‚

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  3. dornahainds's avatar dornahainds February 11, 2018 / 6:33 pm

    Excellent expression-ism.. 😎πŸ₯€πŸ˜ŽπŸ₯€πŸ˜ŽπŸ₯€

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  4. gizzylaw's avatar gizzylaw March 22, 2018 / 6:54 pm

    I was there just before you. I love that your poetry says what I felt when I saw Antarctica that January morning. I spent a week trying to say what you said in just a few lines.

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