24 thoughts on “Love Past Time

  1. Misky June 23, 2016 / 4:06 am

    This is a visual treat, Lillian. Apricots sky – very nice.

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  2. Walter J. Wojtanik June 23, 2016 / 5:18 pm

    More gentility to be soothed by! Gentle breeze, soft sighs and wizened arms. There is such wonder in this poem, Lillian!

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    • lillian June 24, 2016 / 6:10 am

      Thanks, Bjorn. If I don’t say it later, have a wonderful dVerse vacation! 🙂


  3. Sanaa Rizvi June 23, 2016 / 5:25 pm

    A most gentle, beautiful and inspirational poem, Lillian. I am floored ❤

    Lots of love,

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    • lillian June 24, 2016 / 6:11 am

      Oh Sanaa, I live for your hearts! 🙂


  4. Grace June 23, 2016 / 5:31 pm

    Love the visual of the apricot sun though the sadness can be felt from the fading sky.

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    • lillian June 24, 2016 / 6:11 am

      Aging skies, aging love — both lovely to hold. 🙂


  5. Charley June 23, 2016 / 7:13 pm

    I enjoyed your poem as much for what you didn’t say as what you did. Your poem is on the art side of subtle. Subtle as the breeze that stirs that curtain. Wonderful!

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  6. Victoria C. Slotto June 23, 2016 / 7:52 pm

    Oh my…I wrote the gentle breeze/curtains in my OLN poem before I read this. Soul sisters, kindred spirits…or it’s just a summer thing.

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    • lillian June 24, 2016 / 6:12 am

      Oh, Victoria, I think in many ways we are kindred spirits! Shall be meandering to read here now.

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  7. Truedessa June 23, 2016 / 11:22 pm

    I too like the apricot sky. In the summer I sleep with the window open and let the curtains dance in the breeze.

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    • lillian June 24, 2016 / 6:13 am

      Nothing better than sleeping with fresh air! The curtains dance — sort of like the puppy’s paws in its dreams 🙂


    • lillian June 25, 2016 / 6:42 am

      Thank you so much! So nice to see you this morning, over my morning cup of coffee. Glad to see you joining here — feel free to take a meander around a bit. Always happy to have another poetry/word lover on board! 🙂

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  8. AnnMarie Roselli-Kissack June 26, 2016 / 2:24 pm

    I want to sit by the window with the lave curtain blowing, thinking on past loves and tender moments – your words, Lillian place me there in deep thought and warm smiles

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