The kiss
mouth probes deep
like humming bird
seeks the nectar of life.
The touch
skin to skin
gentle dancing fingertips
massage, caress, progress to joy.
No words
guttural moans and gasps
penultimate vulnerability.
Oh Erotica, I succumb to thee.
My body smiles, hums and throbs
as it melds into his.
Word Press Writing 201 Final Day Prompts: the word “pleasure,“, sonnet (14 lines: stanzas of 4, 4, 3, and 3 lines — rhyming not required in contemporary sonnet), and apostrophe (speaker in poem addresses another person, a personified object or emotion). I’ve enjoyed the class!
lillian the home poet 
I’ve enjoyed sharing this class with you, and getting to “meet” you. Quick work on getting this written. Impressive!
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Wondrous! Can’t help falling in love with your words….:-)
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Aw (blushes)
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Think you are responding to my Erotica poem? So glad you enjoyed it!
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Yep yep :-)..I didn’t realize I was replying to the previous comment..
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Smiling I am with morning cup of coffee in hand! Many thanks!
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Thanks, Al. Son and grandson coming for the weekend so needed to finish last night (Ben’s prompt comes about 8 PM the evening before the day of the assignment – Boston time).
Yes – I’ve enjoyed the class and especially getting connected to others who enjoy the world of poetry!
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Nice little sonnet that you’ve written here. Steamy, too.
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So glad I signed up for this class for so many reasons! I tip my first cup this morning to you – and thank you for your compliments here. Looking forward to following your blog and hopefully more morning “chats.” Best wishes to you and enjoy your weekend!
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And a very happy weekend to you, too, Lillian.
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Hmm! Madam, that is spicy hot! Very lovely and leaves a lot to be imagined 😉
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As the ole saying goes….thought I’d leave ’em thirsting for more 😉 So nice meeting you in this class! Tippin’ my first cup of coffee to you – hope to see you many more mornings!
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Definitely 🙂 It’s been lovely connecting with you 🙂
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Oooh. Sexy. Glad to have met you, Lillian! I’ve enjoyed your work of art!
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Thanks, Annie! So very nice to meet you in this class…hope to continue “meeting” you like this 😊.
So glad you liked this one … It’s quite different from what I usually write — but that prompt “pleasure” and the end of the line….well, fun to end on a different note!
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Wowza, Miss Lillian.
And here I am feeling guilty for publishing a nude figure, when your intimate words are beyond “erotica” 😉
sexy stellar word styling here!
am:)
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Well…every once in a while ya just gotta let go! Was a bit worried when I saw what the pen wrote but thought I’d post it and hope for smiles rather than tsk tsks 😳
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😉
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Sorry I missed this one! That’s what I call blowing off steam.
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Ah….just now seeing your reply. Yes….sometimes the words just pop out of my pen. Must have been drinking especially hot coffee the morning I wrote this one…….or maybe it was after a second glass of wine in the evening? 🙂 So glad you liked it!
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Coffee does that to me too. 😉
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