Home at Sea

Thanks to my poetry mentor, Holly Wren Spaulding, who keeps reminding me to seek the “poem within the poem.”   This one sentence poem first appeared as part of Life’s Choices.

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Home at Sea

Dune shack dweller these many years
she fancied herself a Crustacean
sliding through life sidewise.

3 thoughts on “Home at Sea

  1. OldenGray's avatar OldenGray May 24, 2015 / 3:27 am

    I’ll bet you are at the top of the class Lillian! Well worded!

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      • OldenGray's avatar OldenGray May 25, 2015 / 1:16 am

        You put such a concerted effort into making the words come alive Lillian, and it truly shows in each post! Along with your readership, your family too must be very proud of you!

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