Tantalizing

In today’s age of Twitter, LOL, BFF, etc, you’d think writing one sentence poems would be easy…..but to be grammatically correct, have meaning….tough stuff!  This is my first try 🙂

Tantalizing

Standing close, head tilted back
with eyes pressed shut,
small curvey hollow of neck exposed
by an open top button on her uniform,
she waits to taste her very first kiss

5 thoughts on “Tantalizing

  1. Liverpool Fun's avatar Asteway Gattew March 30, 2015 / 6:01 am

    Beautiful! So little words, but I can fully picture it in my mind. What an amazing talent. I hope one day, I find the ability to do the same.

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