It’s a Craggy Life We Live

From this vantage point,
looking up, like looking back.
Contours evident.
Cracks, crevices, smooth edges,
veins streak across surface.
Planar sedimentary laminations
mark periods of sustained times.
Strength, resilience,
past layered upon past,
weathered but still tall.
Pulpit Rock in Norway
metaphor for life.


Written for dVerse, the virtual pub for poets around the globe. Today we’re asked to write a Quadrille (poem of exactly 44 words, sans title) that includes the word “contour.” Will also use this poem for the first day of NaPoWriMo, National Poetry Writing Month, where the challenge is to post a poem every day in April!

Photo taken two years ago, on a Celebrity cruise where we visited Norway and took a boat trip down the Lysefjord and saw Pulpit Rock.

14 thoughts on “It’s a Craggy Life We Live

  1. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay April 1, 2024 / 1:29 pm

    This is beautiful, Lillian! I hope you had a Happy Easter.🩵

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  2. Arcadia Maria's avatar Arcadia Maria April 1, 2024 / 7:51 pm

    Nice quadrille and great picture.

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  3. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli April 1, 2024 / 8:29 pm

    How magnificent this stone person is. It almost looks like every so often on the way up there are evaporation lines, like the water line used to be there. We fade into insignificance next to it, yet here we stand. Wonderful conclusion in your last line and agree with it. Lillian did you feel any energy emanating from it?

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  4. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry April 1, 2024 / 9:59 pm

    The contour of rocks and rock layers is most fascinating. Well done.

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  5. kim881's avatar kim881 April 2, 2024 / 3:34 am

    I do love a craggy cliff, Lill, and this one is well and truly craggy! I love the details in:

    ‘Cracks, crevices, smooth edges,
    veins streak across surface.
    Planar sedimentary laminations
    mark periods of sustained times.’

    It is indeed a metaphor for life.

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  6. Helen's avatar Helen April 2, 2024 / 10:57 am

    Most definitely a metaphor for life … we have an overabundance of them in Central Oregon. Cheers to you on this fine April Day, Lillian.

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  7. Nicole Horlings's avatar Nicole Horlings April 2, 2024 / 5:15 pm

    Great poem, Lillian. That’s an impressive cliff, and it made for an interesting metaphor.

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  8. Dora's avatar dorahak April 3, 2024 / 10:17 pm

    An excellent metaphor for life indeed, Lill. A wondrous quadrille. I see having a geologist for a husband wears off. 😀

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  9. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander April 7, 2024 / 7:03 am

    Fan~friggin’~tastic, Lillian ❤

    And a photo to boot!

    ~David

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  10. pvcann's avatar pvcann April 8, 2024 / 11:28 am

    A sense of the past promising a future yet.

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