Misfit Stands Tall

Standoffish elitist mother
newsstand famous dad
outstanding intellectual brother.
She never fit in.
Headstands, handstands,
she tumbled through life.
But the joke’s on them.
She wandered into a club,
took the mic and found her voice.
Highest paid standup comic,
guess who’s laughing now?

A bit late, but written for dVerse, the virtual pub for poets around the globe…responding to Monday’s Quadrille prompt. Use the word “stand” or a form of the word, in a poem of exactly 44 words, sans title. I decided to see how many words I could use that include the word “stand” in them! Had fun with this one. Photo from pixabay.com

10 thoughts on “Misfit Stands Tall

  1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli August 10, 2021 / 1:37 pm

    I like the rhyme scheme here. Is this based on a real person, Lillian? It feels like it. Lady Gaga? I enjoyed all of the stands and can see her in my mind walking up on stage. Good title!

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  2. hdwoonie23's avatar Helen Dehner August 10, 2021 / 4:06 pm

    Love the Quadrille and the mystery … Is it Sarah Silverman or Amy Schumer?

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  3. Jewish Young Professional "JYP"'s avatar Jewish Young Professional "JYP" August 10, 2021 / 4:50 pm

    Nice! A story in just 44 words. It’s great when people find their niche.

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  4. Ron.'s avatar Ron. August 10, 2021 / 5:40 pm

    Portrait Bellisima!!!

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  5. Ali Grimshaw's avatar Ali Grimshaw August 10, 2021 / 7:33 pm

    Wonderful wordplay. You told a whole story in 44 words. It makes me wonder if anyone still uses the phrase, “Last man standing.”

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  6. adda's avatar adda August 11, 2021 / 6:27 am

    Wonderful!! Such mystery… ❤

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  7. Mish's avatar Mish August 12, 2021 / 4:12 pm

    This has to be a real person…..at least it is now! Nicely done, Lil.

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  8. Ingrid's avatar Ingrid August 15, 2021 / 3:20 am

    I love the way you turned this around and made the misfit the victor!

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  9. Terveen Gill's avatar Terveen Gill August 19, 2021 / 7:47 am

    I guess she’ll have the last word and the last laugh.
    Wonderful and witty! 🙂

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