Our ancestors. Our families.
They sailed through rough seas.
They worked hard, dreamed big.
We are us because of them.
Their identities may fade but
Their determination remains apparent.
Pictured and posed in family albums,
They live on in sepia tones.
Written for dVerse, the virtual pub for poets. It’s Meet The Bar Thursday (MTB) and Frank hosts, asking us to write a Reverse Poem. Read it top to bottom. Read it bottom to top. Line by line. It makes sense both ways. Quite challenging!
Photos:
Left: Hjalmer Siegfried Hallberg, born in Sweden, 1884. Arrived Ellis Island, NY at age 22, in 1906. My husband’s grandfather.
Right: Adam Gruenwald, born 1857 in Germany. Arrived in U.S. in 1880. Grandfather to my father.
And here it is in reverse, including the same punctuation at the end of each line.
Immigrants
They live on in sepia tones.
Pictured and posed in family albums,
Their determination remains apparent.
Their identities may fade but
We are us because of them.
They worked hard, dreamed big.
They sailed through rough seas.
Our ancestors. Our families.
This is challenging! Yes, our ancestors fled persecution, starvation, and dreamed of a better life. Not much different than those who do so nowadays. Love the photos.
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Exactly! Glad you enjoyed.
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I enjoy your poetry in general, Lillian. You are a gifted writer.
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❤️
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Very nice! The description goes both forward and back.
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Yes, I succeeded at that, but not at having two different meanings in the two reads. Maybe I’ll work a little bit more at it😊
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Interesting that the message is the same reading it both ways.
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Yes. I just couldn’t,t get two different meanings – may have to work at it a bit more and post a second on the same theme.
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I tried again this morning and got a better one. The brain needs to be pretty perky to get anything like what’s intended.
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I’m amazed you kept the same punctuation forwards and backwards, Lill! I cheated and didn’t use any. 🙂 What a story to tell, Lill, of those ancestor who live on in sepia tones. You most certainly nailed the form and met the bar!
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Thanks, Kim. What a tricky form and I am incr dulous at those who did this AND had opposing meanings in the two reads.
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I can understand their/our story Lillian and I thank you for sharing your family’s photos. We are certainly who we are today because of them.
I believe there is trick to the reversal form like trying out different perspectives or emotions. A challenge to tickle our brains, certainly.
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Yep — tried and tried to have two different meanings – 1 in the forward and 1 in the backward. That escaped me – but I do like the way this turned out so I’m satisfied.
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Love this Lillian! They live on in sepia tones
Wonderful!
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Thank you, Mary.
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Amazing!!! Love the photos and the poem is so smooth both forward and backwards… Kudos!
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Ah, you always make me smile, Adda 🙂
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I am curious about those immigrant ancestors and enjoy looking at old photos…in sepia tones
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I did some genealogical research; found old photos; talked with relatives. Put together albums for both my children that started with their ancestry and took them all the way to when their own wedding days. Very fun to do! Of course my album isn’t finished yet but I did get theirs done as Christmas gifts.
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Wonderful gift!
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I love the ancestors in sepia tone This poem really works so well.
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Thanks! 🙂 Thought with everything in the news about immigrants it would be good to write this one.
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It’s great!
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You see determination when looking into their faces, which is not an uncommon trait one applies to ancestors. I wonder if they thought of themselves as that too.
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We have a fabulous photo of Hjalmer holding hands with about six other gentlemen, dancing a jig on the ship the USS Sweden – we’ve been told that this was when they first saw the statue of liberty. 🙂
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Love that you included the photos, Lillian. I have many of the same type. Beautiful poem forward and back.
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Thank you!
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Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Thank you!
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I love how history loops back on itself. Well done!
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Glad you enjoyed!
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Coming in late, but on the trail now. Your reversing works perfectly–cohesively. Don’t worry about how the emphasis or message changes–that’s part of the magic of the form./ I believe we have used this form here before. Gosh how the years fly by.
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Glad you enjoyed, Glenn. Have been out of comission for about 2 weeks….some medical issues that were a bit scarey but all turned out good. So I’m back on the dVerse trail again and smiling. Happy. Thankful for every day! 🙂 So I apologize for not answering more quickly and can’t even remember if I read others’ posts for this prompt? Starting fresh as of yesterday’s “earth” prompt 🙂
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Beautiful mirror imaging, lillian. It fits somehow that the message remains the same!
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Thanks, Frank!
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My pleasure, lillian! 🙂
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I probably shouldn’t be such a bore as to take sides, but I prefer the reverse.
Other than that, the poem struck me as very well crafted.
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Well….I think that’s part of the magic of this form….one can choose which way one likes the best 🙂
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