anxiety panicky, out-of-control debilitating, all-consuming, frightening nervous, sleepless / composed, content empowering, stimulating, calming mindful, cognizant serenity
Written for Tuesday Poetics at dVerse . Lisa is our host and asks us to consider “opposite poems” …… giving us several options for our creative process today. One is to follow this form: Line 1: a noun/subject Line 2: two adjectives that describe the noun/subject Line 3: three ‘ing words about the noun/subject Line 4: four words: two about the noun/subject and two about its antonym (opposite) Line 5: three ‘ing words about the antonym Line 6: two adjectives that describe the antonym Line 7: an antonym (opposite word) for the noun/subject The noun and its antonym I chose: anxiety and serenity Also posted for NaPoWriMo Day 6 . Illustration: some wierd photoshopped photo of me done years ago.
Like night and day! When you write it out and compare them there is no other choice, is there.
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Amen to that!
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you did wonders with this Lillian – its also interesting reading from the other end though it does not give the same relief!
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Glad you enjoyed, Laura. I really like the form.
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My goodness this is absolutely outstanding, Lillian! 💝 Anxiety is no doubt all-consuming.
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Serenity is sometimes hard to achieve….but it seems to me to always be worth trying for!
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You certainly nailed this one, Lillian. Your word choices are perfect, crisp and precise. Well done!
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Thank you!
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Good on you, Lil. I, too, choose to write a diamante. It was so much fun, I wrote four of them. The form feels so free and existential.
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I agree….I really enjoyed the form. I was surprised how much time it took to just get the right words for one of them. Good for you to do four!
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I almost chose the diamante, too, Lillian. I’m glad I didn’t. Nothing I could have written could compare favorably to this fine work. Salute!
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You are too kind, Ron. I found it took quite a bit of time for this short of a form….just to come up with the right words against each other!
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I would choose serenity over anxiety at any day Lillian.
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Me too!
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You’ve nailed these opposites justly. I felt the calm of reading it forwards, and felt the tension of reading it inverse. I prefer the path to end in serenity, Bravo.
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Exactly. That’s why, in the natural reading of it, the words take you to serenity!
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I would certainly choose serenity, Lillian, and I try to reinforce this every day!
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Me too! Sometimes it’s hard….but just a few minutes of meditation can sometimes center me for the rest of the day. 🙂
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I like the way your diamante can be read both ways, Lill, and have a completely different effect. I too choose serenity.
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Glad you enjoyed, Kim.
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