Garden me . . .
cacophony of brilliant colors.
Red roses, blue lobelia
brown-eyed susans,
and raspberry-tinted cone flowers.
Beguile me with sweet scents.
Lilacs, lily-of-the-valley
and honeysuckle too.
Nearby apple trees
offer their sturdy limbs.
I climb . . .
dislodging blossoms on the way,
sit atop and dream.
Quadrille posted to dVerse, the virtual pub for poets. Victoria is hosting today and the word to include in our exactly 44-word poem (sans title) is “garden” . Photos from Pixabay.com except the lilac, which is outside our building. Poets from around the world gather at dVerse. Come join us!
I love your chosen palette, Lillian! FYI, for some reason your poem isn’t showing up in Mr. Linky.
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Ah….I had it scheduled and then forgot to put it in Mr. Linky when dVerse opened. Thanks for the reminder! It’s there now.
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So many wonderful flowers to fill a garden… love it.
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Thank you, Bjorn! 🙂 Gardens really can provide a respite to this challenging world we are living in right now.
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What beautiful flowers and words Lillian!
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Thank you, Linda. So glad you enjoyed!
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I was so close to using a color cacophony, too! Such a beautiful, descriptive walk in your real or imaginary garden, Lil. I like the flowers you brought out to play.
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I’ve always loved the sound of that word! 🙂 And I love gardens that burst with colors! 🙂 Glad you enjoyed.
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My goodness this is breathtakingly beautiful, Lillian! 😍😍
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Thank you, Sanaa! 🙂
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Clever use of “garden” as a verb, and to name the flora is to people the poetics. I also applaud giving colors a voice.
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Absolutely beautiful writing!
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what a delightful posy to cheer up our morning!
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Your title is perfect as the poem is blissful indeed. I like the use of verbs with “beguile me” and “garden me”. There is a sense of surrendering to nature’s wonder and the dreamy ending it inspires. I love it.
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Oh, your garden is a delight for all the senses. Delicious.
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And a lovely dream it is.
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What a beautiful garden!
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nesting is best. Yessss.
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garden me – I love the opening and the rest is pure beauty.
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What a wonderful picture of a garden your poem creates. I enjoyed reading it.
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aaaah. that opening line set the tone of the poem eloquently. this is magical.
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All those beautiful, colorful blooms–a treat for eye and mind.
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Beautiful
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I can envision the beauty of this garden
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Aaaah, I too wish to stretch out on a sturdy limb and in the fragrant colorful oasis you’ve penned. Lovely!
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I love the lively action and vivid color in your garden poem!
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aww soo beautiful and lovely poem…
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