Drawn to a metaphoric life-style
she sparkled and effervesced
through a bubblicious youth,
toast of the town.
Aged now,
she sits beside her Christmas tree,
mulls over memories.
Clutches sachets of anisee seed,
crushed cinammon sticks,
ground cloves and citrus peel.
Low heat radiates
as embers die nearby.
Amaya hosts Tuesday Poetics at dVerse, the virtual pub for poets. She asks us to think about secret ingredients…be they in a recipe or a poem. “Think subtle but noticeable.”
Raise a Glass talks about life in metaphors….from the champagne-like effervescence of youth; to the earthy sweetness of old life, like a mulled wine, commonly known in Scandinavia as GLØGG and in Germany as GLUHWEIN/glow wine.
Pub opens at 3 PM Boston time. Come join us!
Life as a beverage to be consumed – nice
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Glad you enjoyed! 🙂
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This whole poem warmed me up. love all the foodie references throughout.
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Ah….just like sipping a glass or mug of warm mulled wine 🙂
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She’s doing all right;
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She sure is! 🙂 A little mulled wine beside the Christmas tree — that sounds like a lovely way to enjoy a Christmas and reflect on your memories past.
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I think this is a wonderful way of growing old… I think there is still some champagne in me… but I do mull over wine and rock with beer too.
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Hah! Your comment made me smile, Bjorn. No beer for me……but I think I’ll be bubbly till the day I die.
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Love the scents: Clutches sachets of anisee seed,
crushed cinammon sticks,
ground cloves and citrus peel.
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Thank you, Grace. To me, the best part of warm mulled wine, in particular Swedish glogg, is using it almost as aromatherapy! 🙂
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A lifetime as seen through what she drinks, learning as she sips: you are what you drink. Nice. I’m dark, like my beer:)
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I’m mostly bubbly! 🙂 Glad you enjoyed.
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I love the fizziness in the opening lines, Lill, the way it settles into the mulling and mulled wine by the Christmas tree, and ends so aromatically!
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Thanks, Kim. Glad you enjoyed!
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I like the phrase “metaphoric life-style” and the last two lines.
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Thanks, Frank. It was an interesting prompt!
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Drinking in life to the full is her secret…cheers, Lillian!
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Ah yes…..we must imbibe as much as we can of life’s twists and turns!
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Love this, you bubbly thing you! I am at the stage where I prefer a cut of eggnog by the fire. Love the scents in this.
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Glad you enjoyed, Toni. I must say, in all honesty, egg nog has always curdled my tongue! I’ll take mulled wine every time 🙂
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I am an old southern girl from a teetotalling family. I make my egg nog like my great grandmother who was taught by her mother. You enjoy the wine I will enjoy the egg nog and we both shall have happy times.
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Ah, I’ll sit and sip or sup with you any time my friend! 😊
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Remember, dear, you are what you drink. I was going to write about the ingredients in a fine wine, but passion rode roughshod over my pen, and the state of the world beckoned me.
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Ah yes……I most definitely prefer wine, mulled or not….over egg nog which curdles my tongue and beer which just smells of hops and sours my mouth! 🙂
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i like the changing flavors and composition (bubbling to mulled) of the seasons
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Glad you enjoyed! I thought it most appropriate to post at the pub! 🙂
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Cheers!
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Very nicely done! Even in old age embers radiate heat!!
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Oh they do indeed! 🙂
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“she sparkled and effervesced”
“mulls over memories.
Clutches sachets of anisee seed,
crushed cinammon sticks,
ground cloves and citrus peel.
Low heat radiates”
This is so good. I love the rhythm and sound throughout. The end is melancholy, but maybe it doesn’t have to be.
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So very glad you enjoyed. hmmmm…yes, a bit melancholy. Or perhaps simply mulling over the past and thinking a life well lived 🙂
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toast of the town got me. Clever phrases. Apt metaphors, Lill!
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Glad you enjoyed!
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yes, i did, Lill!
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Cheers! This was lovely.
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Thank you, Violet. Appropriate to post at a pub, right? 🙂
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What a lovely metaphor for a life well lived. Well, I thought it sounded well lived, anyway!
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Oh yes, Sarah. Definitely meant to point to a life well lived….and still the love burning a bit as well.
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A beautiful write!!
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Thank you! Much appreciated!
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Bubbly champagne and mulled wine- love the comparison to youth and aging!
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It’s kind of true, right? At leas, I think so. Especially during this Christmas season, I find myself mulling over memories, old photos, days with my folks etc.
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SMiLes mY FriEnd Lillian
for the effervescence
of Youth
Bubbling
Up From
An Eternal
Spring Need
not be a Secret
Ingredient for a Free
Song and Dance is Just
A Child of Wonder Anew
Stepping Back into the
Shoes and Songs of LiFE..:)
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Ah yes…..no secret the woman of this poem has enjoyed her life 🙂
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SMiLes..
With
Happy Love..:)
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I can’t imagine a more apropo contribution for a dVerse Poets Pub prompt. LOL! As a man that happily imbibes his red wine and the periodic beer and port, I salivate at your luscious imagery! 🙂
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Thanks, Frank. Smiling I am at your comment here!
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I am late getting round to read. My cardiologist has me on new meds that have making me dizzy, so been difficult reading, sorry!
Lillian, I want your sachet, i am inhaling the fragrance over here. i will toast you with hot cider (not permitted spirits), and I’d stoke your fire if I could… enjoyed this poem… 🙂
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Ah Rob….careful with those meds. Went through that with my husband….it just takes a while to adjust. As we always say, thankful for every day.
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