Squint your eyes,
tantamount to willful aperture.
Unsee dissonance, the ugly, the bad.
Visualize instead the good wherever it may be.
Work it. Become it. Traverse only there.
X marks the spot and if you believe, it can be found.
I’m hosting Meet The Bar Thursday at dVerse, the virtual pub for poets. At MTB, a particular form of poetry becomes the prompt. Today, I’m asking folks to write an Alphabet Sestet! A poem of 6 lines that uses an alphabetical sequence that appears in the first word of each line. Hence, I’ve used the alphabetical sequence S-T-U-V-W-X in my poem. The first word of each line, begins with the corresponding letter of the alphabetical sequence. Line 1 starts with S; line 2 starts with T; line 3 starts with U; etc. Any alphabetical sequence may be used: writer’s choice!
Pub opens at 3 PM Boston time. Come join us. It’s easy as A-B-C, 1-2-3 in the words of the Jackson Five’s wonderful early hit! 🙂 Image from Pixabay.com
Unsee—like it!
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Yes! Wouldn’t it be great if we could just unsee a lot of stuff???? 🙂
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Unsee, unhear, just undo!
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Wilful aperture — such a timely phrase. I spent the day with my grandson who held up his hands like binoculars searching for hawks yesterday. Love this!
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Oh yes….and did you ever hold up your hands (let’s see if I can describe this right), with the palms to your face, your thumb and forefinger touching each other, making circles over your eyes, and then your other three fingers under your chin? Seems to me I used to sing some silly song with that like, “Up we go, into the wild blue yonder….” and those were our flying goggles????
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I love the thought of finding your place… we just need to have a map…
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Sometimes the map is right there in front of us….we just need to look a bit….and other times, it seems so very hard to find.
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I love the positive self affirmation verses specially these lines: Work it. Become it.
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Thanks, Grace. Sometimes I just need to say these words to myself, out loud. These days, I think there is more need for pusing ourselves to find the positive and also, making it happen.
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The challenging end of the alphabet! Love “unsee” and “wilful” – great word choices. And a great message, too.
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Glad you enjoyed, Sarah. I do tend to be a positive person….my daughter once said to me, “Mother! Every movie can’t be the Sound of Music!” to which I replied, “Why not?” 🙂
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I quite agree with this positivity. We need more ‘good’. Lovely image!
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Thank you, Vivian! 🙂
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😊
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On the eve of Florence, and with Trump mid-rant and unhinged–your poem is even more welcome. I do so enjoy the “fun” prompts; levity is a necessity.
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Thank you, Glenn. Yes — my son is in NC but inland. However, his home is surrounded by very tall trees so we are nervous for him. And oh yes…..somehow we need to look for the good and the positive and also make good happen (read that VOTE in the November elections!) – or we would lose our sanity these days!
And oh how I loved your Crazy Town! 🙂
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Sometimes one has to squint to see the good.
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Exactly! 🙂
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Marvelous poem! 😎🥀
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Thank you, Dorna!
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Does the title suggest your alignment with Nike’s recent controversial move? If so, then 👊🏽. (Fist bump, not face punch, ha.)
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Oh my —- never even thought of that when I wrote this! Maybe it was in my subconscious….subliminal???
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How poetically you describe the law of attraction…’love squint the eyes to the ugly’ see instead the good place you wish..well done.
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed.
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Thank you for this fun form! This is the kind of form I can get behind – not fussy at all. I love the upbeat tone of your poem. We need all the upbeat we can get nowadays. With Florence looming, we are holding our collective breaths.
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I always like a little fun! 🙂 Glad you liked the form….one I made up on short notice as I was “subbing” for a host who couldn’t make it so I only had a couple of days to come up with something. Seems folks had fun with it 🙂
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Great job Lillian!
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Great advice.
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Just call me Pollyanna 🙂
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Beautiful reminder to find and appreciate the beauty around us. (Sometimes hard to do in these troubled political times).
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I agree….that’s why we have to squint sometimes 🙂
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Good poem, good advice.
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed.
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Good one, and just what I need right now – thank you!
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Ah….we all need more positives in our life! 🙂
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We sure do!
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Love the positivity here, Lilian!
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Just call me Pollyanna! 🙂
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Love this determination!
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Yes! Make it so!! 🙂
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Love the message.
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Happy to hand out positive vibes 🙂
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work it, become it – we seldom hear this these days, the younger generation seems to get things so easily, we are made of sterner stuff – love the unquenchable spirit i feel in your poem
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So glad you enjoyed! I sometimes feel myself saying to myself, just do it! 🙂 (Not related to Nike at all)
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haha I never thought of Nike till you mentioned it, but my mum used to say this well before it became famous!
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Oh, I do believe! Such a positive message… loved it!
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Well you know, Adda…..I was always one of those in the audience who clapped and clapped to make Tinkerbell live 🙂
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You are right a positive attitude makes all the difference. Love the picture… x marks the spot!
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May we all find that spot to add more happiness into our lives! 🙂
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Good advice, Lill! My eyes aren’t squiting so much since I picked up my glasses on Wednesday and today I see only the good! 🙂
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Oops! That should say ‘squinting’! Maybe my glasses haven’t solved the problem after all – or it’s just my wonky fingers!
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Wouldn’t it be wonderful if there really did exist those proverbial “rose colored glasses” ??
Squint….squit….squirt….however we can get more positives into our world! 🙂
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kaykuala
Work it. Become it. Traverse only there.
X marks the spot and if you believe, it can be found.
Wise words Lillian, very motivating!
Hank
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Thanks, Hank. And yep – I really do believe it! 😉
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“tantamount to willful aperture” is a great line, and I also like unsee dissonance. There’s much I’d like to unsee. I just saw a “Just Do It” meme that was just do it in November, and the Nike “swoop” was dt’s hair.
I like the positive message in your poem.
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So funny. You’re the second person to mention Nike. I wasn’t even thinking of them when I wrote this. Ah….maybe I’d “consumed” that message subliminally???
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I love this Lillian, the original choice of words and the image of X marking the spot…and ‘unsee dissonance’ is superb.
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Thank you so much for the kind words here, Janice. Truly appreciated!
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Just realized we used the same letter sequence. 🙂
I love the message you convey here. Very uplifting.
“Work it. Become it.” Yes! That’s how we make things happen.
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Yep! And I do believe 🙂
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love your message of ‘yes, we can’…and your poem is a treasure by itself
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Thank you for your very kind words here. Truly appreciated!
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Powerful! Yes!
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Oh yes! I do believe! 😉
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