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8 thoughts on “Storm”

1. Adda September 7, 2018 / 11:38 am

   Must be a rainy, gloomy day in Boston too! I sense every sense your poem exudes so clearly. ❤

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   • lillian September 9, 2018 / 4:25 pm

     Thanks, Adda. It was indeed a grey rainy day when I wrote this!

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2. dornahainds September 7, 2018 / 1:02 pm

   Fabulous! 😎🥀

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   • lillian September 9, 2018 / 4:26 pm

     Thank you, Dorna.

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3. Paul Sunstone September 7, 2018 / 5:34 pm

   Ugh! Depression. I wish it never existed, never came to visit.

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   • lillian September 9, 2018 / 4:27 pm

     It is such a scourge on far too many people. And a disease that needs to be recognized and destigmatized.

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4. Jade M. Wong September 9, 2018 / 12:23 am

   “tears masquerade as rain” ~> I love this line, so simple, but it evokes so much emotion and so many images.

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   • lillian September 9, 2018 / 4:27 pm

     Thank you, Jade. Yes. That is my favorite line in this one.

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