5 thoughts on “Bereft

  1. Charley July 15, 2017 / 4:02 pm

    A great poetic voice and tone to this one. However… the genius of the wording tells me the voice doth protest too much (or something like that). Nice work!

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  2. Adda July 16, 2017 / 10:41 am

    The image nicely matches the poem with its gloom and clouds. In this poem I hear your desperation, desire to write but words are not coming… very nice. 🙂

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  3. Janice July 18, 2017 / 1:30 pm

    It’s amazing how great poems can come from a faintly flickering muse. I particularly enjoy: ‘Ideas flit through synapses dead end at fingertips.’

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