Twiglet #8, two views

Like folding chairs
marred from years of abuse,
they wait to be used again.

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Like folding chairs unfolding
legs scrunched to body,
newborns squeal with protest.

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Twiglet #8 is folding chairs. A twiglet is a short phrase. Or a word. Maybe two. Its aim is to “prompt” a flow. A thought. The idea is to create a poem or piece of prose using the twiglet as the jumping off point – the shorter the better! New twiglet prompts from Misky appear each Tuesday — join the fun! Photo in public domain.

16 thoughts on “Twiglet #8, two views

    • lillian January 25, 2017 / 9:12 am

      Glad you enjoyed. These are really fun to do 😊

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      • Lorraine January 25, 2017 / 9:35 am

        Yes, they are quite fun.

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    • lillian January 26, 2017 / 12:36 pm

      Isn’t it amazing the thoughts one conjures up from just two words? 🙂

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  1. Misky January 25, 2017 / 10:41 am

    Excellent take on those folding chairs. I’d never have thought to take it in this direction. Brava!!

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    • lillian January 26, 2017 / 12:36 pm

      The mind works in mysterious ways…..:) Glad you enjoyed!

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  2. vidyatiru January 25, 2017 / 9:45 pm

    enjoyed both of them and looved the second one! . and they do sound like a great poetic exercise i will enjoy 🙂 will join in the fun (if not this week, then soon!)

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    • lillian January 26, 2017 / 12:37 pm

      Thank you! Twiglets are really fun to do….I’ve always loved doing “short” poetry so wiglets really rock in my estimation. Do join us! 🙂

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      • vidyatiru February 3, 2017 / 1:39 am

        will try out a few first 🙂 and definitely plan to join in the fun..thank you

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  3. Magaly Guerrero January 26, 2017 / 1:31 pm

    The first one made my heart catch, so painful and true. The second–squealing and all–left me feeling some hope, hope that someone will listen and tend to the babe.

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  4. julespaige January 26, 2017 / 1:56 pm

    Some folding chairs really do get well used…But like hangers in a closet I wonder if they too multiply…

    Oh, that baby – so hard to unfold ’em. 🙂

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