I am in my eighty-seventh life on this earth. I’ve always been a feminist. Female, beautiful, and independently sufficient at the same time. I loved my can-can ruffle life in the Parisian bordello. And I donned a bright sash when I pounded my suffragette drum.
But this narcisstic genius body? It’s perfect!
I am bright, erect, and wear my sunny ruffles well. I stand above those two-lip characters, dutch men all of them. Short-lived though I shall be, there is nothing daffy about me! I am JonQuil the magnificent. And I out shine every bloomin’ thing!
Word Count: 96. Written for Friday Fictioneers. Rochelle Wiseoff-Fields provides the photo prompt and a myriad of folks work their words into what is known as “flash fiction.” Must be a complete story about the photo, in 100 words or less. FYI: the jonquil, as well as the daffodil, are members of the Narcissus genus. Photo Credit: The Reclining Gentleman.
😀 Charming and astute!
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Decided to use humor this time….glad to see your smile face! 🙂
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Ha ha, so clever, and what an attitude on that flower, I love it!
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Yep. Decided to go with humor this time. And that flower….just sitting there….so tough….just seemed to have her hands on her hips with a saucy attitude 🙂 Glad you liked it!
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I love it, especially the “sunny ruffles” standing tall above the Dutchmen. This really brightened my day, Lillian. Don’t mess with the flower! Well done.
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Don’t mess with me!!! Just seemed like this was a tough cookie….er flower….standing there so tall, lording it over the puny tulip. So glad you enjoyed. Always fun to make people smile!!
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It did make me smile, indeed!
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I adore this, Lillian! Wonder what her next life will be…
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So glad you like it, Dale. I had some fun with it! She is enjoying being a genus now :)….
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What a charming, wonderful story! (And yours, along with my second story for the same prompt, plus another FF writer’s, have daffodils that speak! Something in its stance, I suppose.)
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Fun to go a little daffy this time! 😊
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Speaking, thinking daffodils. Whatever next? But I fear she’s heading in the wrong direction. Different take on the prompt
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Fun to go a little sidewise every once in a while!
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There’s a bravado speech if there was one ever. Long may she be strong.
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Bravo! 😊
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Somehow this got me thinking of Orlando.. it seems she can live so many lives and rise above the rest… maybe she’l be male the next time around.
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You are too funny! Smiling I am 😊
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Lillian,
I love this piece – exotic in its flora/fauna symbolism – that’s what I am inhaling here
am:)
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Rainy day in Bermuda. A day to head to the zoo – animals cavort in the rain. Maybe we should learn from them😉. Nice to see you over my first cup this AM ☕️
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nothing like rain and romance;)
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Ooh a sassy flower! Love how fun this story was to read.
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So glad you liked it! Sometimes it’s just good to take the fun road!😊
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Very confident bordering on arrogant flower.
Gotta love a girl with some attitude though.
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Exactly! Smiling I am at your response 😊
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XD
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Dear Lillian,
What a charming take on the prompt. I wonder what her next life will be.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle! This jonquil just looked so proud and tall! 🙂
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I love the wordplay and humour in this. Wonderful take on the prompt.
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I did have fun with this! Glad you enjoyed 🙂
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I like her style. Burn briefly but brightly??
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Exactly!
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Lovely take on the photo and on the genus of the plant woven in!
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Thank you, Lori. Glad you enjoyed it!
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My pleasure, Lillian 🙂
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Oh this made me smile out loud!
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Oh so glad 🙂 Happy your words make me!
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Both humorous and eloquent! Great back-story!
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Smiling I am!
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